WOA Reflection

I struggled greatly with my WOA. Every idea I came up with seemed cliche, boring, or overwhelming. Trying desperately to think of something that is truly an unrecognized work of art, I drove past my favorite oak tree: one centered in the middle of a field all by itself. This is when I decided to focus on the lone tree as my WOA.
This was, however, far from the end. I had to narrow down the compelling aspects of the tree, both in relation to other trees and relation to my own experiences. Finally, after much support from my professor, I narrowed down what I was going to do.
Not being able to tread on the field that held my inspirational tree, I used an old pear tree down the road from my house, which worked better than I ever could have imagined. The day I went to take pictures, the blossoms were in full bloom, the sun was shining, and the grass was greener than ever. It made for beautiful pictures.
I didn't expect the paradoxical beauty of the tree. Part of it was strangled with massive vines while the other was teeming with flowers. That made the perfect bridge for my WOA.
I really wasn't impressed with my educational bridges until I read the responses to my video and watched it again. Now they jump out at me. The tree is a perfect metaphor for students, who we don't examine well enought to understand not only their dark side, but the beauty of them also, not matter how hidden. I wish all teachers would be able to understand that each students does have a past and a future. The difference between the tree and students is that we can find out the student's past and influence their future.

Fashion is a Verb!

To Fashion: (v) to imagine, create, and express; To choice, a fashion statement. To fashionfashion something, be it an idea, an artifact, or so forth, is to give meaning to one's existence (Wong)

While I found Wong & Henriken's article on fashion interesting, I wasn't really intrigued until I came upon the paragraphs that addressed style. As an English teacher, I specifcally teach style--as it pertains to writing-- to my students. This connection brought the idea of fashion into my mind.

While I keep reminding myself that fashion is a social construction, used to attract people as birds use feathers to attract mates, why can't the same apply to writing? Students develop a style that evolves over time as they themselves mature and learn new ideas. Over these years they hone and fashion a style of their own--well, most of them do. Those who do not see the value in writing lack this "fashion sense." This may be an interesting metaphor to use in my classroom. Their writing style is exactly how they are presenting themselves to an audience, and regardless of their intent, they are taken at face value due to superficial mistakes, such as conventions, mispellings, etc. The thoughts beneath are often masked by these problems. WRITING IS A SOCIAL CONSTRUCTION TO! It is a method of communication!

I think that I'll use this metaphor in my classroom on Monday to help relate the potential or detrement writing can have on a student's impression on others.

P.S. I cannot figure out how to get the highlighting off of my text! Sorry! :)

JAWS: Better Music Than Movie

As I was preparing the commentary on my music project, I had an epiphany: The music of Jaws tells a better story than the film itself does. So, I went on YouTube and I watched a clip once with sound and once without sound. Try it; you'll see. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ucMLFO6TsFM

Speilberg's adaption of Benchley's novel would be nothing without William's accompanying score. There are two plot lines running in the music; in fact, I could complete an entire plot chart on the theme song. There is an exposition, where the hook is established. Rising actions as the prey plot is introduced and elaborated as the predatory hook beats in the background, getting louder and louder. Finally, the battling tunes climax in a loud beat, but the only surviving notes are the two tell-tale notes of the hook: DAH-DAH, that calmly swim/fade away.

And the winner is....

It's very interesting how a song can truly have a plot, how notes alone can tell a story based on the emotions they create.

The Jaws theme song uses flat/sharp notes alternated with natural notes to create the suspenseful hook, which clearly is the basis to this song, as well as the underlying current of panic during the movie.

Compelling? Hell, yes! Almost any person in the world could identify this song just from the feeling it creates. That's powerful!

Music to my ears...

Of course, as an English teacher, I am automatically going to compare music and writing. The parallels are unending. While the "hook" in an essay is presented immediately to get your attention, this isn't always the case in music, but either way a feeling is immediately created. This hook can be threaded throughout the essay to create a feeling of flow and remembrance of the hook that got you interested in the first place. It's interesting to listen to a piece of music as though it is a piece of writing and see how similar notes would be like similar words, ideas. The flow of each, with intro, body, conclusion are symmetrical also.

Either way, the main objective is to get your reader involved, get your reader interested. Boring arrangements of notes are just like boring arrangements of words. While each word/note on it's own is just a word/note, when combined, there is the ability to created compelling thoughts. It's the arrangement of both that makes pieces compelling.

This comparision reverberated in my mind as I listened to the "What Makes Music Good?" shows. Every last thing that Composer Robert Kapilow said could have been translated into the critiquing of a writing teacher. The focus on how each note put together, even as simple as they may be, can create a compelling feeling, image in the reader.